tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post341053264184576982..comments2023-10-12T10:25:09.081-04:00Comments on The Veillee: Only Anarchist (Avengers) Are PrettyEm + Jesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12651833449881968705noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-36522504375340151642012-02-15T20:28:17.195-05:002012-02-15T20:28:17.195-05:00Thank you for your comments, they are very kind an...Thank you for your comments, they are very kind and helpful. Actually, shouldntbreed is right on. This is a flash fiction piece inspired by my own love for comic books. Originally, this was a stand-alone piece as shouldntbreed also noted. However, I believe it may have potential to be flushed out further, which I certainly do not mind attempting. Only time can tell, I suppose.Kacy Muirhttp://songsofsirens.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-82791975826341646872012-02-14T15:05:59.472-05:002012-02-14T15:05:59.472-05:00These are things we like to have pointed out. Nitp...These are things we like to have pointed out. Nitpickiness makes for better writing!Emeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03005406259934417112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-64161512398848939112012-02-10T12:44:42.002-05:002012-02-10T12:44:42.002-05:00I agree. It had quite a cool comic book feel, and ...I agree. It had quite a cool comic book feel, and it being left open to readers wondering what could happen next allows the imagination to have little extra fun.Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10784734079146964518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-64023289207343083642012-02-10T10:33:22.675-05:002012-02-10T10:33:22.675-05:00Also, as a long ago reader of comic books, I think...Also, as a long ago reader of comic books, I think and like that this reads like the first page of a comic book.Shouldntbreedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215668031959900157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-64664194526096740142012-02-10T10:29:11.995-05:002012-02-10T10:29:11.995-05:00Actually I prefer it to end there, and on that not...Actually I prefer it to end there, and on that note. I like punch and that's what the story leaves you with. A punch. I have one nitpick with the entire story and it's so petty I feel slightly ashamed. "the only day the office was given permission to dress casually." (in my head) Casually (the adverb) is different than casual (the adjective). So it's a difference between the act of getting dressed nonchalantly and wearing informal clothes. <br /><br /><br />I told you it was nitpicky.Shouldntbreedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215668031959900157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-21464884097696878142012-02-09T20:48:07.934-05:002012-02-09T20:48:07.934-05:00I certainly hope so! (???)I certainly hope so! (???)Emeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03005406259934417112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2246906619359480278.post-54342452283962880912012-02-09T16:15:58.130-05:002012-02-09T16:15:58.130-05:00This is just part 1 right? RIGHT?This is just part 1 right? RIGHT?M. Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04338063902596386356noreply@blogger.com